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PostSubject: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sat May 24 2008, 22:11

Hey Gracettes. I've been thinking of writing this for a while and tonight I started writing it so I hope you enjoy. This story is based on my favorite song by the Graces called Dile. So I hope you enjoy my fic. Cool :cheer:

Chapter 1
*RING*

“Hello,” answers Sara.

“Sara, it’s Elena,” Elena says while crying.

“Elena, what’s wrong? Why are you so upset?”

“He’s leaving.”

“Who’s leaving?”

“Jonathan.”

“Jonathan is leaving? When?”

“Tomorrow morning. He’s leaving and he’s not coming back.”

“But why is he leaving?”

“Because of our job. The company offered him a better job in California and he’s going. I’m never going to see him again. What will I do without him?”

“I know you’re in pain right now. Do you want me and the girls to come over?”

“Yes. I need my best friends with me.”

“Okay I’ll call Joy and Kelly and we’ll be over there soon.”

“Thanks Sara. You’re a great friend.”

“Hey what are friends for, right?”

“You girls are great. Okay I’ll wait for you to come.”

Sara hangs up the phone and calls Joy first.

“Hey Joy. It’s Sara.”

“Hey Sara. What’s up?”

“It’s Elena. She just called me and she’s really upset. Jonathan is leaving tomorrow and she’s devastated. We need to go over and be there for her.”

“Oh my God. I can only imagine how heartbroken she is. I’ll call Kelly and we’ll be there as soon as we can.”

“Great. See you soon.”

“Okay. Bye Sara.”

“Bye Joy.”

Joy then calls Kelly and tells her of the situation with Elena.

“I’m on my way,” says Kelly and she hangs up.

Sara, Joy, and Kelly get themselves ready and head over to their friend in need.


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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 02:11

ohhh i love it Regi!

it'S awesome!!!Can't wait for the next chap!

p.s. i should continue mine... lol! Rolling Eyes :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 05:57

One more fic! :macarena: :macarena: :macarena:

Good job! cant wait for the next chap..

p.s-can i kill that jonathan?! Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad


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ohhh i love it Regi!

it'S awesome!!!Can't wait for the next chap!

p.s. i should continue mine... lol! Rolling Eyes :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

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im waiting for it Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 11:59

Elena? Suspect *giggles* queen

Nice start... Very Happy wanna read more so you better keep on typing Regiiiiiiiii... :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 17:56

Chapter 2
Sara was the first to arrive at Elena’s apartment. She knocked on the door and Elena answered it still with tears in her eyes.

“Hey Elena,” Sara says while hugging her friend.

“Hey Sara. I’m glad you’re here.”

“How are you holding up?”

“Not well as you can see.”

“Well listen your girls are here for you. I called Joy and she called Kelly and they’re on their way.”

“Did someone say our names?” said Kelly while she and Joy entered.

“Joy, Kelly, thank God you’re here,” Elena says while hugging them both.

“Of course we’re here. When our friend is in trouble, we’re here for each other,” said Joy.

“Okay. Why don’t we all sit down and then Elena, you can tell us what happened?”

“Okay,” Elena said softly.

All the ladies got comfortable on the couch and Elena began her story.

“Well this morning I went to work and as soon as I got in I said my usual hello’s to everyone including Jonathan. Then Jonathan said he had something important to tell me. So he took me outside and then told me the sad news that he’s leaving tomorrow. He’s known for about two weeks but he was scared to tell me since he knew I would be upset. How can I not be upset? The man who is my best friend and the love of my life is leaving me and I don’t know when or if I’ll see him again.”

“Oh I’m so sorry. I know how much you love him,” said Kelly.

“If only he knew how much I loved him,” said Elena sadly.

“Elena, you still haven’t told him of your feelings especially knowing that he’s leaving,” said Joy.

“No I just couldn’t.”

“Why not? Maybe if you told him you loved him, he would stay,” responded Sara.

“I doubt it.”

“Why?”

“Because I don’t know. I’m just so confused right now.”

“Elena, you love him. You need to tell him before he leaves or else you’ll never get your chance ever,” responded Joy.

“But what’s the point. He doesn’t love me and by me telling him that I love him wouldn’t have a purpose.”

“How do you know that he doesn’t love you?” asked Kelly.

“Because if he did indeed love me, he wouldn’t be going away, would he?”

“But then if he knew you loved him, then he wouldn’t be going away. He probably thinks you don’t love him so like you he’s thinking what’s the point of telling you how he feels,” said Sara.

“Maybe you’re right. I just don’t know. Should I tell him or should I not tell him and try to forget him when he leaves?”

“Only you can make that decision. You have to follow what your heart says.”

“Kelly, I don’t know what I want to do.”

“Well how about we help you decide?”

“But how?”

“Why don’t you tell us of when you first met Jonathan and how you fell in love with him?” asked Joy.

“Well it’s a long story.”

“We have all night. Go ahead and tell us. It might help you feel better and then decide of what you want to do.”

“Okay. I’ll tell you all.”
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 17:57

Maguilita wrote:
Elena? Suspect *giggles* queen

Nice start... Very Happy wanna read more so you better keep on typing Regiiiiiiiii... :lol:
Why the giggles? :lol: :lol: :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 17:59

*coughs Elena* Suspect Déjà vú !!!! :lol:

duh, I've just realized that I hadn't log off, since like many hours ago... :lol: tho I wasn't here... :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:01

It looks like you figured out a connection between Elena and a certain person on this forum. Razz Razz :lol: :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:07

and I'm still wondering if that certain Jonathan has another name... Shocked like three letters, perhaps... :lol:

*runs away screaming* Don't kill me!!!!! :lol:

BTW... I think that girls join-together needs some drinks... Cool *giggles*
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:08

You're right. Jonathan is you know who's middle name :lol: :lol: :lol: I'm crazy. I know. :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:11

No you're not, you're just... tra la la... :cheer: :lol: Well, I'm crazier than you... Shocked :lol:

I'm a witch!!!!!! Twisted Evil Mwahahahha...

Suspect is anyone planning to add the "literally" to my previous statement? 'cause I can slap you... :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:16

You're definitely a witch Twisted Evil Twisted Evil :lol: :lol: Just kidding. :lol: :lol: lol!
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:20

Found it... :lol:



lol! Well, i'm off to have dinner, and back at night... Razz

Keep on typing sis... Twisted Evil :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 18:21

I have the next chappie written and I could post it if you want. Twisted Evil :lol: Have a good dinner Wink
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Sun May 25 2008, 22:39

Chapter 3
It was in November 2007 when Elena’s boss at work told her that she had hired a new assistant manager. The assistant manager that was at the store before had left in September. Now after nearly two months of searching, there was finally an assistant manager. Elena was relieved because now she could get back to doing her job and not the job of someone else. Jonathan was the person hired for the job.

It was Jonathan’s first day and Elena was anxious to meet him. Out of all the staff members, she was the only who hadn’t met Jonathan yet. She was hoping that Jonathan would be better than the past two assistant managers she’s worked with. The first one she started with was terrible. He was a slacker. He didn’t care for his job. He was late all the time and he acted inappropriate with customers. When he was fired, Elena was very happy. The second assistant manager she worked with who left in September was better than the first but most of the time she didn’t like working with him. He acted very bossy and was sometimes rude with her and the customers. So she hoped that this new assistant manager would be better than the ones she’s worked with before.

Jonathan arrived at work on his first day. Elena arrived soon afterwards. Her boss let her in and she was introduced to Jonathan. When Elena first saw him, she thought to herself, “Wow. He’s cute.” And he certainly was. He was a little taller than her with dark brown eyes, a smile that just made Elena go weak in the knees. He wore a striped blue shirt with dark blue pants. He knew how to dress and look good.

“Nice to meet you,” Jonathan said as he shook Elena’s hand.

“Nice to meet you as well,” Elena said with a smile.

As they were shaking hands, Elena felt an instant spark. She had no idea what was happening with her. She had just met this man and she was having all these feelings that she shouldn’t be having especially since this man is her boss, at least somewhat her boss. After the introductions, Elena just went on with her shift, helping customers, doing computer work, the usual, but whenever Jonathan would be nearby, Elena forgot completely what she was doing and just focused on him.

Finally it was the end of Elena’s shift and she left after saying goodbye to her coworkers especially Jonathan. When she got home, all she could just think about is the man she just met, Jonathan Salcedo. A man that she instantly fell in love with at first glance.
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Mon May 26 2008, 06:57

what happened here?? Suspect Suspect Shocked a witch?? affraid affraid cyclops

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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Mon May 26 2008, 10:36

RaChEl_R86 wrote:
what happened here?? Suspect Suspect Shocked a witch?? affraid affraid cyclops

Amen to that... Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect Suspect :lol:


btw...nice chaps.... Cool Cool
its getting interesting...keep it going... :bravo:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Mon May 26 2008, 20:11

Excuse me... Suspect *giggles*

Regi... Shocked mooooore... Shocked then what, then what? Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Mon May 26 2008, 21:45

Chapter 4
“You know I remember that day. You called me after you got home and you just couldn’t stop talking about Jonathan.”

“I remember that too Joy because she called me right afterwards,” Sara laughed.

“And then I finally got the phone call. It was Jonathan this. Jonathan that.”

“Oh God. Was I that crazy for him back then?” Elena asked.

“Yes,” Joy, Sara, and Kelly said in unison and then laughed.

“All right. Continue with your story Elena,” said Kelly.

“Okay. So we started working together. It was great. I would leave work always with a smile on my face. Eventually as the weeks went on, he and I got to know each other a lot better. Soon both he and I felt comfortable enough to talk about personal things. We told each other things that no one else knew. Mind you we were at work while doing this. I’m surprised we never got in trouble,” Elena laughed. “I felt so comfortable with him. Soon I considered him to be more than just my coworker but a really good friend. He felt the same.”

“That’s so sweet. So you became friends first. That’s good. I think it’s so important to be friends with the man you’re in love with first. It makes the relationship more special,” said Sara.

“It’s so true,” responded Joy.

“Okay so when was it that you finally realized that you loved him.”

“Well remember when I went to Florida in December to see my family. It was fun being with my family but most of the time all I thought about was Jonathan. At night, it would take me so long to fall asleep because I just missed Jonathan terribly. I missed seeing his face, hearing his voice. I just missed him. I felt incomplete without him being there and that’s when I knew that I was in love with him,” Elena says while bursting out in tears.

“Oh Elena, you love him so much. You should’ve told him your feelings as soon as you realized them.”

“Joy, I just couldn’t. It’s not as easy as you may think. We work together and he is one of my supervisors. If the company were to find out, both of our jobs would be in jeopardy. And what if he didn’t feel the same about me? Things would’ve been very complicated.”

“And how do you know that he doesn’t love you? If I can be honest with you, every time I’ve come to visit you at work, I’ve seen the way he has looked at you. And he doesn’t look at you like he’s your friend. He looks at you like a man in love.”

“Really?”

“I’ve noticed it too,” responded Sara.

“So have I,” said Kelly.

“He does love you Elena. And you need to tell him that you love him,” said Joy.

“That he is everything for you,” said Kelly.

“And that you can’t live without him,” added Sara.

“You’re right girls. I need to tell him tonight or else he’ll never know. Okay I’m going now.”

“Wait Elena. If you’re going to tell Jonathan of your feelings, you’re going to need to change.”

“I agree with Kelly. You can’t go there with PJs on,” Sara laughed.

“You’re right,” Elena laughs. “What should I wear then?”

“Well let’s go to your closet and choose the perfect outfit,” said Joy.

All the girls go to Elena’s bedroom and help her choose what to wear.
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Tue May 27 2008, 02:43

humm.... where did I already heard this?? Suspect Suspect Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Tue May 27 2008, 04:10

Oh poor Elena i hope she'll tell Jonathan what she fells:(
btw great chapters Regi,waiting for more!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Wink I love you
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Tue May 27 2008, 05:47

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humm.... where did I already heard this?? Suspect Suspect Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
:lol: :lol: :lol:
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Tue May 27 2008, 06:33

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RaChEl_R86 wrote:
humm.... where did I already heard this?? Suspect Suspect Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
:lol: :lol: :lol:

u laugh?? Shocked Shocked Shocked Suspect u are so shameleeeeeeeeessssssssssssssss pirat

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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Tue May 27 2008, 12:19

Nice chap... Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: *Sin el, no puedes vivir* Chapter 1- Updated 9/16   Tue May 27 2008, 18:04

RaChEl_R86 wrote:
Regina wrote:
RaChEl_R86 wrote:
humm.... where did I already heard this?? Suspect Suspect Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
:lol: :lol: :lol:

u laugh?? Shocked Shocked Shocked Suspect u are so shameleeeeeeeeessssssssssssssss pirat
I'm not shameless Twisted Evil :lol:
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